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Review:ReeBee says:
Hello! Haha, this was quite the story! Loved it! My first Neville/Luna actually :)

Loved the characterisation :D awesome job! Neville! Aw! So cute! Haha, I could imagine Neville complaining about these things! And since I'm not British, I was just as curious as Rick about some of the phrases! They made me laugh anyway!

The description also made me laugh! Rick! Oh god! Hilarious guy! :D I also liked how you included the first paragraph at the end! I actually loved this! Lol!

And the plot was super interesting and original and the flow was good! I quite lived the characterisation! I'm a sucker for those 'moments' with strangers! Loved this!

Great job! Not much to say except that it was hilarious! :D great job! :D

-ReeBee

Author's Response: Hi, there!

I wrote this for the House Cup challenge last year. It was a lot of fun to throw Neville into a completely frivolous, funny situation. And being able to involve Luna like that was just the icing on the cake.

Rick was modeled loosely on my uncles, so I know the character pretty well.

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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