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Review:MC_HK says:
Hello :)

This is probably one of the most interesting stories I've read on here! I have yet to come across something like this, so I wonder what you're going to do with it :) I'm excited to read more!

I do think there could be a couple little details added in that would flesh out the story a bit more. They had been in St. Mungo's for a very long time, right? Thought to be completely mental. Maybe you could go more into how hard it was for Frank to get a job back at the Ministry. I don't think that after something like that they would just hire him back right on the spot, so maybe you could go more into their spontaneous recovery. Maybe he had to go through numerous psychological tests, he had to be observed before leaving the hospital, they questioned him day in and day about about what he remembered, things like that. Otherwise, I find this to be a very good story that is well written! Eager to see what comes next :)

--Monica

Author's Response: Ooo yay, thank you, I'm glad to hear it's interesting and that you want to read on :D

I'm also glad it's raised these questions for you - that was really my intention with this chapter. As it's meant to be somewhat mysterious, the answers to those questions are intentionally not included yet, but they will be in subsequent chapters. (If I answered all questions at the beginning no one would bother to read on, right? :P ) I hope that doesn't take away from this chapter too much.

Thanks for your lovely review!


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