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Review:LilyLou says:
Hello!

Wow. I read the first chapter a while ago, maybe for a review swap? Well it didn't have me 'OH MY GOSH I HAVE TO REA ON' but I'm SOO GLAD YOU COMMENTED THIS LINK! I love it!

The suspense is phenomenal! The whole Fred ordeal? What's that all about? It leaves many questions to be unanswered. You tell us that she dated Fred, but that's it. What happened? What did he do? Oh, the questions! Brilliant work there!

Albus sure is a cunning fellow. He's the kind of kid that would intimidate me, and that's putting it lightly. He's clever, quiet, mysterious. He's someone that leaves you horrified, yet fascinated, all in the same moment. You wrote him marvelously!

Aaliyah! She's interesting, as well. I don't even know how to interpret her yet. Perhaps when I read the next chapter I'll have a better idea? I hope so. She's just a big jumble of mysterious as well.

This whole story is going to link together in the end brilliantly! I cannot wait to read on! Great story, I love it! It's going on my favorites list!

-Janelle

Author's Response: Hi!

Oh.. 'The Fred Ordeal.' I like the sound of that. I'm going to start calling it that haha. And yes she dated him, things happened and let's just say it ended on not the greatest note.

Albus is cunning... and that is what I like about him. Him intimidate you? Nah, you're too amazing for that! I'm glad he's fascinating and horrifying at the same time. I never thought he could turn out both ways.

Aaliyah isn't as mysterious as Albus but still has this mysterious past edge. And if you do read the next chapter, you'll get to know her better. She's smart and witty but also straightforward and caring.

This review made my night so thanks for that. You were just so positive and honest and that is the most I can ask for from a reader and you gave it to me so... thank you!!

~Sama :D


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