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Review:AlexFan says:
That was beautiful. I have nothing to say except that was beautiful.

The emotion in this was so raw and powerful and I could actually feel everything that George was feeling. I have never seen someone capture the emotions of what all Harry Potter fans probably felt when Fred died. I'm not much of a crier but I did tear up and I was sniffling because this was so sad. You showed me how George would never be able to reproduce another Patronus once his brother died.

I can't imagine what George must be going through losing his twin, it must be like losing half of himself.

The description in this was amazing (which goes without saying since you actually made me tear up) and I could just picture everything in my head. The scenery and what everyone's expressions must've been like when they spoke to him. Harry would definitely be the one person that would understand what George was going through, I can understand how he would provide the most comfort to George.

The little things that happened around the Burrow like Fleur's dresses gaining those spots and Aunt Muriel among other things, it put a smile on my face. It seems like Fred really was showing George that he was still around even if his body wasn't. It was almost like Fred was trying to cheer George up.

The ending when George went to go and talk to Fred's grave really got me though. That was my favourite part, it just spoke to me more than the rest of the story. Personally, to me it showed me exactly how much George cared about his twin brother and how far he has to go to stop grieving Fred (or if he would ever stop grieving Fred).

This was just beautiful and I absolutely adored it. Good luck in the challenge and the results shall be posted soon!

Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! It was a pretty hard piece to write without stopping several times for an emotions break but I'm pretty happy with it. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks again for the read & review.

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