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Review:Infinityx says:
Hello! I'm here for the BvB review battle.

I'm so glad I got back to reading this story. The amount of humor throughout just kept me laughing the entire time! :D

I LOVE your Granny Lucy references, and I love how Audrey brings them up at such perfect moments. The part where you brought in Verity's cat was so unexpected and random, but it was so fitting with Audrey's life! She's such a jolly character and it's hard to imagine her with Percy. I'm really curious about how they'll get together now.

Wow. You've managed to bring a reference to Draco in this chapter even though he's not necessary to the plot in it. It's wonderful that his sexy smirk is rubbing off on her. More Draco in the coming chapters I hope!

Um..I found a small typo as I was reading this but I forgot exactly where it was and I couldn't find it when I read it again. Oh well! It's nothing major anyway!

Yes! Audrey and Oliver! Oliver seems great. Why does she have to end up with stuck-up Percy? HOW could she end up with stuck-up Percy when there's Oliver around? And the curiosity builds up.

Jemima is a very interesting character. I'm not completely sure what to make of her. She seems very influential and outgoing, flirty as well. I hope there's more interaction between her and Audrey as the story progresses. But it's so weird that she's trying to set Audrey up with Percy! It couldn't have missed her attention that he's incredibly boring.

Once again, I love how you've used parentheses at certain places. It definitely adds to the feel of the chapter and the humor is so astounding. You've got some real talent there. :)

Another wonderful chapter! I'll definitely keep reading.

Author's Response: Hi! I'm so glad that you came back too because this review just made me squee so much and really made my day :D

Haha, I couldn't resist throwing them because Granny Lucy is quite a character and if Audrey goes on to name a daughter after her I imagined that she would have been quite a big part of her life. I'm glad that I've got your curiosity peeked because all I can say is that perhaps Percy isn't as boring as he seems to be :P

Yay for Draco! I love slipping in references about him, and he's been a very fun addition to this plot. He will have a bigger part later on so don't worry too much about it!

Ooh, thanks for saying! I'll read through and try and find it :D

Bahaha, I loved throwing in Oliver because it just seems to confuse the hell out of people because who would date Percy when there's Oliver lurking around, so just watch and wait!

I know what you mean, but I think a key part of Jemima's character it that a lot of the time she's just the influential party goer but Audrey realises later on it might just be part of an act so you get to see more of the real Jemima later on which should be good! Hmm, again, just watch and wait with Percy is all I can see ;)

*squees and squees due to your lovely comments* aw, all of that means so much to me and just made me insanely happy! Thank you so much for this amazing review, it was really great :D

-Kiana


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