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Review:Cavell says:
Hi, it's Raine from the forums and the review battle!

I've seen the link around for this story a lot, and I've been very intrigued by it so I'm really happy that I got to read and review it now! The first few paragraphs grabbed my intention instantly, and I was definitely intrigued about the situation Teddy and Victoire got themselves into even from the very beginning, so if that was your intention with the letter, then well done! Also, I loved the idea for this story -- the few stories I've read about these two characters in particular are always set in Hogwarts, so even if you hadn't specifically requested for Atlas Air to be reviewed, I would have definitely reviewed it anyway just because the whole idea of this story really interests me.

Your description here is flawless. I don't know what it is about it, but even from reading your description of what kind of place the two characters in, I kind of felt their desperation -- the way you wrote the descriptions just gave off that kind of vibe, if that makes sense? Which it probably doesn't, sorry! :p I quite liked Victoire and Teddy's characters too -- I loved the whole part about them being more than the best friends they were before this chapter was set and how protective Teddy was over Victoire and I'm honestly really looking forward to reading how they develop into the people in this chapter.

Even though I'm not completely sure of what was going on in this chapter, I still think it was a good introduction to this wonderful story and I just want to add that I adore the fact that this is set in Africa :''D Your quick pace was easy to keep up with and your clear writing made for an amazing read and I do wish you all the best for future chapters -- this was a pleasure to read!

--Linn

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