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Review:GingeredTea says:
This was, of course, an extremely powerful chapter. I am almost left with a lack of words. I was hoping desperately you would have Marigold's father live and gasped when you killed him! Ahh! It was like you had killed Sirius. I understood why you did it but... *glare*
LOL okay, moving on and a bit backwards. I loved how you began this chapter with Slytherin senior and Stephane meeting on the dirt road. The description of the children being called away was terribly realistic, both fascinating and compelling while also being very sad.
The way you had Marigold come into possession of the cloak was brilliant.

I am terribly terribly curious about what will happen next!!!

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Thank you! It's lovely to hear you found it powerful. I know, I felt awful as he was a wonderful man, but I'm glad you do understand why. :P It was a little cruel...

It's good to hear you liked the scene at the beginning, and the children being lured away. I'm really happy you found it realistic and sad! :( It really does present a change in the timeline of Hamlin and a shift in the story, and I hoped it would stand out.

Yes! Her having the cloak was necessary, and felt like something her father would do to protect her in a final act of love.

Thanks so much for the brilliant review! :D It's so exciting to me that you like the story. :)


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