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Review:marauderfan says:
Welcome back to HPFF, I see that you've returned from a hiatus :)

I really like your characterisation of Victoire here. She is pretty awesome - she's not only a mother but also a Healer, she stays on top of her work, and even with Teddy not around she does well as a single mum (I know, she's not single, but if Teddy is a professor I imagine he's away a lot, so Vic does most of the work taking care of Emmaline at this point.) She's so strong, and I love that in female lead characters.

It must be so hard for her to be away from Teddy for that long though! I hope they get to see each other more often than just the school holidays :(

I also really liked your descriptions of the hospital and the absurd late night shifts they have to work. Victoire's tiredness was really evident after working such a long day, poor thing.

Someone ate a gnome?!?! Eek...

Her conversation with Louis was hilariously awkward. Or awkwardly hilarious. Anyway, its cute that he takes care of Emmaline. Btw, Emmaline is such a cute kid :)

Oh dear, what is in that letter? Good thing or bad thing? :O

Author's Response: Thanks, darlin'! :D

Victoire is pretty awesome when it gets down to it. She juggles all of the things a more modern mom would do, and I think that's totally something she'd be doing since her generation is technically only like, a few years behind ours. Don't worry, though. I keep referring to her as a single mum and I have to go back in fix it because I don't want anyone freaking out about her and Teddy lol.

She actually gets to see him most weekends, whenever he's not busy he can come down. Or she goes up every once in a while, though work doesn't always allow them to see one another, and that's not just his job in the way.

It's a week away from the summer holiday! :D They'll most definitely get the chance to see one another more than they do at the moment! :D

Yeah! Isn't that gross! I think he just really wanted to get rid of the little buggers once and for all. Or maybe he just wanted those pain potions ;).

It was awkward in all it's hilarity! haha :) I had so much fun writing that scene, and I could picture the two of them so clearly that I had to stop to laugh a little while myself. He loves Emmaline, though, so he doesn't take to complaining too much. But a promise is a promise after all, right?

Read on! :D The letter is a mystery from here ;)

Thank you so much for the lovely review and welcome! :D I'm smiling from ear to ear right now! :3


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