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Review:Infinityx says:
Hello again! Round two for the review tag!

First of all, yay! I know who Rob is now. He seems like he really cares about Victoire which is clear from his concern and worry for her so I'm curious about what their relationship would be like when Victoire gets back, especially after bonding so much with Teddy.

I love how you've started this chapter off with a letter as well. It would be lovely if you start all the chapters with a letter. Victoire's writing reveals so much about her character as well as her relationship with Rob. And it's an great way of expressing her feelings as well, which you clearly showed in the first chapter.

I enjoyed reading the conversation between Teddy and Victoire. The light-hearted banter there is a sharp contrast from the prologue and it lifted my spirits up considerably. I love the part in which Victoire mock threatens Teddy and his response as well. It gives a subtle insight into the comfortable friendship they have and it's very refreshing to read.

I have a feeling that Alfie Biggins has a lot more to do with this story. I can't wait to find out! Update soon! I'll definitely be stopping by once you do. :)

- Erin

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