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Review:patronus_charm says:
Woohoo, Kirstin itís this story and I finally made it here :D

Ah, this story is just gahasas so beautiful and so wdfewd itís just brilliant and I canít use words. Iíve always had a soft spot for Alice and Frank because their story is so tragic and you showed that so beautifully here and I just want to say how everything was so lovely and Iím so glad that I finally came over here because I want moar! Ok, let me try and write something sort of coherent now :P

But first, yay for Salvador Dali, I can really see the concept his art work would have on the story given that it delves into the idea of dreams and memories a lot and explores the more obscure aspects of life so this fits perfectly.

Wah, your descriptions were just fab ♥. They had this really simplistic and bleak atmosphere if that makes sense, but they were so lovely too. I donít know they were just great and I canít even quote any as I love them all.

Then there are so many questions and hows! Theyíre normal, and itís so lovely because even though it was just a normal day for them with them carrying out things such as making breakfast and talking about Neville visiting them it was so wonderful that they could now do this because a decade before they just werenít there. Iím so happy that they can live their dream of being aurors again, and hopefully we get to see them in action given how good they were. Also, I always felt so sorry for Harry and Neville both losing their parents, but at least Neville can have his back again.

Ah, this was such a brilliant start to the story and I hope thereís more soon because I need answers!



Author's Response: Kiana ♥

aksbdfa;owlejf thank you!! (heh, I can't use words either apparently) I'm so glad you liked this chapter!

Yeah, I had already planned much of the story before I picked out the title, but once I did figure out a title it turned into an even more surreal-inspired story. Hah, I love that you can see the influence of the art on the story :p

I do know what you mean about the descriptions - that's a wonderful way to describe it. Aah! Thank you!

Yes... so many questions. I'm glad it seemed really normal, they certainly need some of that after everything they've been through! You will be able to see Frank and Alice as Aurors - yay, something I can safely answer without giving too much away! ;)

So glad to hear that you liked this! haha, I have the last three chapters written... need to work on the beginning ones :P

Thanks so much for your review!!! ♥


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