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Review:toomanycurls says:
I couldn't stay away from this chapter! The summary and title just pulled me in.

I read it on my phone before sitting down to review and can I just say that I loved this chapter to pieces?!?

In previous chapters I was on the fence about whether Hermione would swing towards Fred or George and I'm glad you cleared that up in this chapter! I loved how you nudged Fred closer to Hermione throughout the chapter. I could feel her blush when Fred walked out in his towel. The quips about cooking abilities in this chapter were great. Hermione's concern about George's cooking was understandable. Ron blabbing about Hermione's cooking just called out how idiotic he is.

Hermione's relationship advice is so logical and perfect. I mean, it's great advice. It kind of makes me laugh that she could give George romantic counsel but won't use the same logic for herself. *sigh* Smart people tend to do that I think.

George/Angelina always seems a bit awkward to me. I'd like to see what would have brought them together in a story where Fred isn't alive.

When Hermione asks Fred over for dinner it's pretty clear that he has feels for her. I don't blame Hermione one bit for not taking to Fred's joking about her cooking (before trying it at least). Oh dear, there's a touch of awkward when Fred asks why George wasn't invited.

Despite the lack of a good snog (which I was rooting for) my heart melted into buttery goo at the end. It was just lovely and full of squee.

-rose

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