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Review:GingeredTea says:
REVIEW SWAP!

So, I read this last night. I couldn't do it justice then, though. I am really truly absolutely LOVING this story.

You have managed to really intrigue me with a Founders Era story, where I haven't even felt curiosity before. Staphane is beautifully crafted to be very realistic and the way you portray Slytherin senior is chilling an as if there is just a smidge of Voldemort there.

Although, I am worried about Staphane more. Is HE the Slytherin that will hate muggle borns? Will it be this Potter boy (he is the first 'Potter' right?) that will steal Marigold's heart and Stephane who will use the rejection to spur his hatred of muggleborns? I wonder.

Let's talk about Marigold for a moment. I feel with her as if she were a real person and you have managed to create this picture of her in my head. Your whole story makes my imagination go crazy, and I love that, because few books can do that. If your story were ever made into a movie, it would be one of those movies I left saying "nah, the book was way better". :)

I cannot wait to see what happens next! GAH! I'm assuming he will enchant the children and bring them to the castle - or maybe the mayor? Well, I'll let my imagination stew for a bit before I continue. Thank you for such a fascinating read!

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Yay! I'm really excited that you like the story, it really means so much! ♥

I'm so glad you're intrigued by my Founders story, then! :D I'm really thrilled you like Stephane as he's one of my favourite creations (Marigold is up there too!). I quite liked how frightening Slytherin was as well and I like how you could see some Voldy in him.

Interesting predictions! Stephane is a little mysterious. He's a fundamentally good person who is easily misled. I'm excited for you to reach the end and see what happens! :D

It's really lovely praise to hear Marigold feels real! Thank you! I'm so happy that the story ignites your imagination, I really loved writing it so getting this feedback is very wonderful.

Hmm, interesting guesses! :) I love reading your predictions! Thank YOU for the beautiful review! :D


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