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Review:oldnumberseven says:
Well, you certainly got my attention by opening the chapter with a quote - not only do I love doing that myself, but it's a beautiful Sartre one as well!

First, I have to commend you (and I'm using the collective you here, since it seems there is more than one writer for this fic?) for adding some spice to the typical train ride/sorting feast template most people use to start their fics. But man, you've got some interesting female OC characters here too. I'm interested to see where things go from here, considering the obvious Lia/Remus and Carter/Sirius attachments :D

My only criticism would be to space out your work more - sometimes your paragraphs are long and truth be told, a little hard to get through. But that's just a suggestion!

Author's Response: ah ah ah i am just now seeing this!!! yes there are two girls writing this fic and we thank you SO MUCH for your review we really appreciate it!! also we will definitely take your suggestion to heart, as this is our first fic we've written together and things *might* be a bit wonky at first lmao

but thank you for the compliments!! x


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