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Review:toomanycurls says:
This is the cutest heart breaker chapter I've ever read. The conversation was remarkably light-hearted and bubbly but the narrative had such sadness. I wanted to slap Ron when Hermione was reflecting on the fact that he never had the same feelings for her and their kiss was a heat of the moment thing. I just felt so bad for her.

Hermione saving Fred seemed so perfect - I think if anyone could have done it, she could. I do like that the twins became closer to her after that. It's a great opening for a potential relationship. Hermione's conversation with Fred and George shows a closeness between them that wasn't there in the books but her saving Fred perfectly puts her in their good graces.

I love how you wrap up the chapter reminding us that Hermione's heart is burning for a child but is scared to love. Though, there is slight irony in her seeking unconditional love from a child but fearing the love of an adult.

-Rose

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