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Review:shez says:
I don't think I've read a Rose-gets-pregnant fic since Delicate and this is really interesting! While romance isn't my usual forte, you're very good at writing romantic scenes (I'm caught between commending you for your courage and furiously blushing because I'm super immature haha). I like that Rose immediately realizes that her actions will indeed have consequences, and reverts to her rational minded persona.

I also enjoyed the differences in the personalities of the Potter brothers. Albus seems like the more responsible (and uptight) one and James is a bit more carefree haha. I'm not sure how I feel about Scorpius because he comes across as a playboy type and I hope that he isn't just using Rose, since she seems to love him ( and especially since she gets pregnant). You did have subtle hints (him holding her arm when Albus catches them) that imply he does. And aww I hope his friendship with Albus survives this change.

Other things: I really hope we get to learn more about why Rose loves him so much (as from the fact he's handsome :p). She doesn't seem like the type of girl who sleeps around.


Oh the pregnancy's going to be interesting haha. Mini Malfoy AHHH! (sorry couldn't resist :p)

Nice read! I definitely enjoyed it! Thanks for the swap!

Author's Response: Hi!

Oh my gosh, that's such a compliment! It's okay, I'm pretty sure I blush a little when I write them! Thanks so much, I really wanted to show a well-rounded Rose. People have more than just one side, and I wanted to make sure the reader got that. So I'm glad you did!

I'm so glad you liked how I characterized all of the boys. Oh she's not the type of girl who sleeps around. Sadly the reason why she loves him doesn't come for a WHILE.

Yes, a mini Malfoy, that'll be interesting.

It was my pleasure, thanks for the lovely review!

xoxo LL


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