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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Yay chapter 2!

It was even better than chapter 1! I was so worried that when Teddy found out that he was going to be like "Oh no, I don't want you to go, we can't go", but he didn't! He's so loveable and awesome and cuddly and I kind of want to marry him because he's just so perfect!

Anyways, aside from my gushing (incoming more gushing): I think that Victoire is adorable, because she's not this proper pristine perfect little veela girl. She's a likeable, relatable woman who works hard for what she has. I love it. I love this story. You're doing a wonderful job.

I can't wait for an update!!

xoxo LL

Author's Response: You're too sweet! Thank you so much! :3

I'll admit that at first I was thinking that maybe Teddy would hesitate a little, but him saying yes right away and being excited about it sounded right. I know how much they love one another and they are definitely willing to work it out with one another. They've both been raised in this super loving and accepting family, and I think it helps them appreciate what the other does even more.

That's such a huge compliment on Victoire's bit! I want her to be as real of a woman as possible. She's one of my favorite characters that I've written to date and she is a lot easier to write than I ever thought imaginable.

Again, you're too sweet :). I'm so happy that you love it, and I'll let you know that I've already started on chapter three. Knowing me I'll probably have it finished by tonight, but it probably won't get into the queue itself until late Wednesday or early Thursday. You know, just so you can keep tabs ;). Thank you so much! Your reviews were lovely!


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