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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Hi!

So I responded to your status and then realized I hadn't read the first chapter! Silly me! It was a pleasure to read, though!

I really enjoy Victoire/Teddy stories, and I hate to admit that I forget about them sometimes. I'm so glad that this story has brought them back to my attention, though, because I'm really enjoying them. This story is making me wonder if I should go comb through some more Teddy/Vic stories so I can read some more! Or write my own! Oh no, what's been started.

I really enjoyed how you explained how busy their life was, and I like that you made Vic and Teddy a little unconventional. I have read a couple of Vic/Teddy stories and I don't think I've ever read one where Victoire got pregnant before they got married. I've always seen her portrayed as extremely similar to Fleur. I kind of like the change!

Louis is hilarious, I really enjoyed his little freak out. It was completely believable and definitely something that a little brother probably would say. As selfish as it was. I can't wait to read what that letter said! Oh and her daughter is so darn cute!!

xoxo LL

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reviewing! :D

Silly you :p going and trying to jump ahead to the end haha.

No! Don't read more! It must be mine and only mine! I'm your precious. XD I'm only joking! I'm so glad that I opened that chapter back up in your life! I've never actually read a Teddy/Victoire story before (that I can remember) so I think that helps me make them different from how others see them. Though I've read stories with Victoire appearing in them, and I always get a sense that her and Dom are like their mom and Louis is like Bill. I think it's the male/female role coming in.

I've always figured Bill was Fleur's soother. She still has her school girl day's traits, but she's happy with Bill and her family, even if they don't believe in being as traditional as she is.

I'm so in love with Emmaline. If she were real, I'd totally babysit her all the time!

Thank you so much for coming by and reading/reviewing! :) it's always lovely to come home to after a long day at work! :)

~Mae


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