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Review:shez says:
Hi there! So I don't usually read Dramione's so I have no clue how you're going to carry this impossible (in my head) pairing out.

Trust me. That's a good thing.

I love it when I don't know how things are going to happen. I also love it when writers keep canon characters...well..in character hahaha. Which I think you've done superbly!

Aww I understand how Hermione feels, growing up and having to face that you're alone. I hope we get more insight on why Ron left her (I mean did he "leave" her or were they just friends? Sorry, I felt that was a little vague.)I'm glad Harry is such a supporting friend and I think you've written their friendship beautifully. I like that he worries about her so much.

Yikes that flashback was spine-tingling! I almost get the sense that Hermione's traumatized by the war and having difficulty adjusting, and then Ron leaving adds to the mix. She seems really miserable and I can't help but wonder if there's something else going on that we as readers don't know yet.

I'm not sure how I feel about Draco yet, since it's only the beginning chapter. I'm curious as to what he wants from her. The letter was kind of ominous (or maybe I'm reading into it?) I admit, I'm curious to see how you're going to portray the post-war Draco here.

This story honestly deserves more reviews.Your writing style is clear and compelling and while I don't know how you're going to go about this story, I'm excited to see :)

shez :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review, your input is really helpful :)

I'm glad you like it so far, and as you said i always think it's best to keep canon characters the same as they were originally written - it makes for a difficult read if a personality is changed from the one we already know

There will be more about Ron in a few chapters time!

I really hope you continue to read, as the letter from Draco was just the beginning and further along we find out exactly what he wants to say to her, and their relationship progresses, albeit slowly. I think some writers make the mistake of rushing things in a Dramione fic, which makes it slightly less believable

Thank you so much, I'm really grateful that you took the time to write such a detailed review :) x


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