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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
wow. Wow. wait for it... WOW!

This chapter was all sorts of interesting and introductory and fun and interesting! I mean, you introduced how many new characters? Four? That's a lot. But they all made sense. I didn't get confused and wonder who was who and why they were there and what not. They fit, they made sense. Which was nice, to just read and enjoy and not try to figure out the story. Kudos!

So. Seth... Confessing. I'm kind of hard-core shipping Aaliyah and Albus to become a real thing, so I hope that his confession doesn't like mess anything up. Cause I'd be really disappointed if it did. I won't lie, I enjoyed the confession scene, but I'm nervous about that kiss on the head. Someone had to have seen that, it's going to be in the paper. This won't go well, will it?

I can't wait to read how you spin the next chapter! Let me know when you update and I'll come read it the second you do!

xoxo LL

Author's Response: Yeah I did introduce quite a couple characters. Did they all make sense? I honestly wasn't sure if they did or not but you saying that they did makes me feel a whole lot better.

Yes... Seth... confessing. So Seth's confession isn't going to mess things up, I assure you. It's actually something that is going to add on to his character and add a layer of understanding to his and Aaliyah's friendship. He's a good person... and he likes Aaliyah... and he's known that for some time now... but he doesn't show it too often. So him finally telling her is a weight off his shoulders. And in the end, he's been one of her best friends for a long time so her liking back isn't his concern but her finding someone she's happy with is. Basically, what I am trying to say is that it won't interfere. The kiss on the head... will it lead to some controversy or not? That I won't tell you since I'm such a an evil author, jk. ;)

I will let you know when the next update is and I can't wait to finish writing the next chapter. Thanks... again. This definitely means a lot! :D


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