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Review:toomanycurls says:
I know I'm going to get shout-y in this chapter. IT WASN'T THE RIGHT TIME!!

...why doesn't she remember? He was trying to get all proper and yet Lexi was insisting and Sirius eventually gave in. She needs to review the security footage.

I'm not sure if I should cry or smack Lexi around. I'm sure she enjoyed it! she just doesn't remember!!

Wait, doesn't Sirius remember what they did? Or does he not know why she's mad? She's totally eating her feelings. Ah, he does remember he just doesn't think that's why she's mad. This chapter is making me hungry.

Ooh, wow, Cami's POV. ^_^

Her flashback to when they were younger was adorable!! I just wanted to pat them both on the head. :D I love that Cami is excited by the idea Lexi hooked up with Sirius. (I'm proud too, does that make me a bad reader?!?!)

I kind of love Cami's advice. I know she's off in a lot of her life but I like her priorities when it comes to ze bedroom.

ooh, I like that Lexi is all confrontational about her sister's self harm. Maybe that will help Cami out in the long run.

Sirius brought James AND James' parents to St. Mungo's to spy on Lexi. Smooth, man.

oooh, I love this line: As an honest to goodness witch, I was being burned at the stake. The stake in question? Sirius Black.

It's just wonderful and perfect.

I love her shout-y speech even more!! HIGH FIVES!

Um, I think James called it. Sirius seriously likes her.

Despite what Sirius said to the contrary, it sounds like a pity date. I hope it goes well!

-Rose

Author's Response: I'm sorry Rose! It had to happen. It's in the plot! It'll all work out, you'll see!

And she does remember. She's just in that half-sleep mode/denial. She remembers all of it... Nope, she was in her right mind. She knows what happened!

She does remember, she just doesn't want to admit it! (She does really like him [and possibly it] though). And yes, Sirius remembers what they did, but he's too thick to realize why she's mad. Yup, she eats her feelings! That comes up a lot in subsequent chapters. And yay! You've got it! :)

Ooh! Cami's POV! I know, Cami was such a sweetie and so was baby Lexi. They were just so flipping adorable! And yes, I know I was excited too (and no, it doesn't make you a bad reader).

Yup, she's got quite the experience in zat area (just don't tell Lexi). And yeah, Lexi isn't very subtle either. And it might definitely! And nope, he didn't bring them to spy, him going to the Potters' family Healer was the honest-to-goodness truth!

Yay! I like that line too! I'm really glad you think it's 'wonderful and perfect.' *blushes profusely* And yay for shout-y speech! And yup! Sirius seriously (heehee) likes Lexi. And no! It isn't a pity date! I promise! And I hope you like how it goes!

Thank you so much Rose!
Lo:)


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