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Review:800 words of heaven says:
Heya! I had a bit of spare time, so I was stalking the forums (as one does) and I noticed that your story was in need of a little love - so here I am, loving it up!

I love me a good Teddy/Victoire, so when I saw the summary I got pretty excited. Then I read the first line, and I was like "Oh no! Not a pregnancy story!" I don't usually read them, but I was pleasantly surprised that this is more of a post-pregnancy story. The angle that you've taken is far more interesting, in my opinion, and I'm curious to see where you take it.

Fleur is a piece of work! I love weddings in general, so perhaps she's just like me, and just desperately wants to go to a wedding. That's probably not the case, but I'd love to see more of her dramatics in chapters to come.

I'm really, really intrigued to find out what was in that letter from Teddy. It's a break-up letter, isn't it? They always are. No one screams at receiving a love letter. Oh Em Gee, my heart is already breaking, and we haven't even met Teddy yet!

Good luck with the next chapter, as well as the challenge! I'll be keeping an eye out for the next update :)

Author's Response: Yay for love! :D Thanks so much for stopping by and reviewing!

Yay for sticking by after the first sentence! Yes, this is not a pregnancy story. It is most definitely post pregnant haha. :)

Actually, Fleur really DOES want to have a wedding, but her morals over the situation do happen to overrun that matter ;).

Actually, let me ease your mind a little. She already read the letter from Teddy. It's the second letter that she discarded at first that made her scream. There is no Teddy break-up letter. :) I hope that eases your mind a little.

Thank you so much! I'm almost done writing the second chapter. If things go my way, I should enter it in the queue tonight (if I can edit it in time).

~Mae


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