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Review:marauderfan says:
Ok. Got distracted for a bit but I'm back! (I have the attention span of a dog surrounded by squirrels.)

Wow. I don't know whether it's because I'm sitting in a cold room or because that first section of the chapter was so creepy, but I got chills reading it! (I think it's the chapter though.) Aaa!

Au contraire. I think the fact that only Rose and Lorcan heard it is MORE worrisome.

The last name Russell? I'm trying to remember now if you ever divulged the last names of all Rose and Lorcan's travelling companions. I don't think you did... must be one of them though, right?

Aw, poor Dalila and Rashidi. I hope he doesn't die yet :( At least he has Dalila there for him, that was good of her to stay with him. Aah you ended with another cliff hanger and this time I can't click the "next chapter" button! O_O

This was a great chapter though! By the way, I did catch a little copy/paste error, there are three paragraphs that repeated in the last section. Beginning with Ill see, Dalila and ending with drinking it will return the others to their natural time period. so you might want to fix that. Otherwise, fantastic chapter Kiana! Anxiously awaiting the next update!

Author's Response: Haha, that's fine and I apologise for it taking a while to reply to this, life has been so crazy this week but yay it's Friday which means free time :D

Bahaha, I think cold rooms make everything creepier so I understand where you're coming from but I'm glad you thought it was like that. I know, bahaha, they should be worried and you too. :P I feel as evil as the man right now :P

Hmm, I can't really say as that would give it away but what I will say it has been mentioned before so it's up to you whether you want to go back and check out who it was :P

I can't comment on the two of them, but I'm massive fans of them so nothing too(insert a... in :P) should happen is all I say. The next chapter is up in around/under two weeks so it's not too long at least :D

Ah -.- That's so embarrassing as I'm always paranoid about that occurring and now it has! I'll fix it right away before I die of shame :P

Thanks for such a fantastic review, Kristin!
-Kiana


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