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Review:marauderfan says:
Kiana! I'm sorry it's taken me SO long to get around to reading this, I'm like 2 chapters behind now! But hey, looks like this is your 100th review on the story, so yay!

Your descriptions in the first part of this chapter are so beautiful. Much like the beginning chapters when Rose is seeing everything for the first time, it came to life again as Hermione sees the shop for the first time. I loved your attention to detail, the things she feels and sees and smells, it's really an excellent description and I could visualise the scene perfectly, feel the desert heat and smell the perfume in the dry air.

I sense bad things coming from Scorpius' plan. And yes the capturing of that man did seem a little too easy. Eek...

Dusk was close to falling, so the shadows grew on the streets, as if charcoal was being heaped onto canvas. -- I love this. Seriously your description in this chapter is beautiful And Acanthus! Ahh I really loved looking around the city with Rose, seeing it all through the lens of history. Too cool.

Lorcan's line about "no time like the present" made me laugh, as they're in the past rather than the present :D

I love the mystery surrounding the temple of Osiris. Gosh, this chapter reminded me how much I love Ancient Egypt. Oh no, Lorcan touched something and disappeared, didn't he?!?! Was he the one who screamed? Or was that Scorpius, possibly? I need to go look back at that earlier chapter about the scrolls. Also where did David and Charlotte and that group of people go?

What an evil cliff hanger. Luckily for me I can just click right on to the next chapter :P

Great chapter, Kiana!

Author's Response: It's fine Kristin! I'm so glad that you could be my 100th review because you've been one of the best readers ever :D

I'm really glad that it reminded you of the beginning chapters because it made me very nostalgic writing this chapter and knowing how far they had all come and how they couldn't really go back again. Aw, I feel as if they're my children who have all flown the nest to the big wide world now and I feel all so lonely.

Haha, I can't really say much about Scorpius' plan and how it will work out but watch and wait is what I recommend.

Aw, thank you! It was so much fun writing Acanthus because we've been waiting for it for so long now I was worried I had gone rather overboard with the description instead :P Yay for history too, because we have to be educational at times too!

Haha, I couldn't resist! Time puns are way too much fun in this :P

I know it made me love it even more too because it meant instead of wasting hours learning about it, it was story research. Ahaha your theories were so excellent but you probably sort of know that they still don't know who or what it was so it could still be any of them :P

I'm not so evil then so it's ok :P Thanks for such a great review, Kristin, it was an awesome one to get for my 100th!

-Kiana


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