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Review:ReeBee says:
KIANA! HI! I've missed this story :( But, here I am for our swap! Awesome as usual! :D

I loved the plot! And the flow was perfection! :D Ooh! I wonder who Scorpius killed?! And maybe he gets sent back in time too! And then he kills someone...? But, why would the bad guy (creative I know) send Scorpius back in time if he knows he's going to kill his ancestor? Maybe it was someone else who looks like Scorpius...? Killing seems very un-Scorpius like... Don't mind my musings ;)

And u left a cliffhanger! What happens with the map?!?! DOES IT WORK?!?!?! Argh!

But, the description was really vivid! I could imagine the slight breeze and the boiling weather (the latter of the two because of the fact that it's scorching here!) Maybe a bit more setting description during the first bit would be good? Not that the flow needed improving :)

Ooh! I love how Charlotte and the rest are developing! We are slowly finding out more on their personalities! :D I would've loved to see more interactions between Rose and the boys (Edward and David), but it's just a suggestion :) I loved the characterisation even without the interactions :)

All in all, the usual awesomeness expected from a chapter of Acanthus! It was great! :D I LOVED IT!

-Curie :D

Author's Response: CURIE! I missed you too, but yay for you being here again :D

I'm so glad that you liked the plot/flow :P Ahaha, I love your theories, some of them are very good but I can't really say whether they're correct or not as that would give the plot away :P It does seem very un-Scorpius, but you'll have to wait and see!

Ahaha, all things related to the map will be revealed in the next chapter, so don't worry!

Aw, poor you, it's nice to write those scenes as it's freezing in the UK! I'll go and look at the first bit and see what I can include because I've needed to edit that chapter for a while now.

I'm so glad that you liked that gang as they are very dear to me, and some of my favourite OCs that I've written. I'll go back and look at that too, but there definitely is some more in future chapters, so don't worry!

Thanks for such a great review, Curie, it was fantastic :D

-Kiana


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