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Review:shez says:
Hey it's shez from the review swap. Sorry it took so long. Life got in the way.

This seems like a really interesting story. At first I was a little confused as to what was going on but then you addressed that concerns. Haha I like Albus' characterization ( I love sneaky clever Albuses ). I'm wondering what he owes James that he's making such a deal and this ronan character seems very malicious. I like that you've taken the time to establish your characters and setting and I can't wait to see where it goes! And what Albus gets up to!

Author's Response: Life tends to do that sometimes. ;)

Yes the beginning is sort of confusing but I'm happy that you figured it out. :) Haha, I like sneaky, clever Albuses too! Gives him more of a mysterious air that I love. He owes James for mostly taking the drama of Hogwarts away from his life, which he is thankful for, and he also owes him for something else that I'll reveal later. Ronan is malicious but she has different strategies for everything which is fun to write.

Thanks for the positive review!! I had a GREAT time reading this. :)


P.S. and Albus gets up to... a lot. ;)

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