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Hi! Now that the identity of your Secret Santa has been revealed, I though I'd leave the reviews from my account instead of leaving them anonymously. :) Sorry for the long wait, though! You know there are times when RL is too much hectic... Anyways, back to the review.

Oh my God, why is Ron always so cuuute in this story? I mean it! His letter was so sweet that I almost kept smiling until it ended. You wrote it perfectly, keeping in mind that the boy was just eleven years old. :)

Poor Hermione! She was trying to make friends with them, wasn't she? You wrote her with equal perfection too. You always seem to write them all in canon with your own style.

I can't wait to read on! It's just the beginning and I'm already wondering through what moments you are going to explore their friendship. :) Really great job!

Ashwini

Author's Response: Yay! Real Secret Santa :D

I totally understand the real life getting busy thing (as it is the middle of February and I am /just/ responding to all of your reviews) so no worries :)

I'm glad you're still liking Ron. I have younger brothers which helps a bit with this story, actually. Helps me know a little better how kids of various ages act.

I always felt really bad for Hermione at the beginning of the first book (a lot of which has to do with the fact that I was just like her at that age). I'm glad you thought I wrote her well.

I've got a basic outline of most of the chapters I'm planning to write, and have a few of them done. I'm really hoping to put up at least one chapter per month and have this story finished by the end of the year. *fingers crossed*

Thank you for all of your wonderful reviews!


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