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Review:ReeBee says:
Oh my god! Firstly, why on earth doesn't this have more reviews?!?! Probably because it's new, because there is not one thing u could've have improved on in this! Well, that's my opinion anyway!

THE ENDING! SO DID NOT EXPECT GINNY BEING DEAD! I thought it might've been Harry from the beginning, but never Ginny! It made me tear up, and even though I cry easily, this was so sad :( But so beautiful! I loved the contrast between Ginny's first year to her sixth with the Carrows! So sweet and beautiful!

I think u did amazingly well with Ginny's voice! Lovely! And the reminiscent tone isn't sad (which suits dead Ginny perfectly), but more hopeful and regretful. She isn't sad that she's dead, just sad that she couldn't say I love you more often. I love that! So sad for us as the reader :(

And the last line! Wow! Loved it! And the comment about the Cauldron cakes! Perfect! And those two paragraphs where it slowly dawns that Ginny's dead! Wow!

Overall, it was so so beautiful! You did an amazing job! Thank u for the review swap! I'm so glad I read this! :D

-ReeBee

Author's Response: Aw, this review has me blushing, I'm so glad you liked it that much! What a lovely review ♥

Hehe, I was hoping to surprise people with that, so I'm glad that was unexpected! Sad and beautiful? Aw, I'm so glad you thought that!

Thanks, I'm glad this sounded like Ginny's voice in its not-quite-sadness. It's a little intimidating to try writing a major canon character. Especially when they're dead.

I'm thrilled to hear that about the last line and the reveal about Ginny's death, and that you liked it so much! Heh, I thought some remark about chocolate at that time seemed appropriate for Ginny.

This review was such a pleasure to read - thanks for the swap!


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