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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello!

Ooh, this is so interesting! I love Regulus Black stories and I think I've read one or two from you and I always LOVE the way you write him! You have a knack for Regulus, I must say. You just get his characterisation so perfect!

I really liked the way you had some of his childhood in it and how his father constantly said things like 'Blacks weren't afraid', 'don't show weakness' and such. It seems very fitting with what we know of the Blacks. Sirius always seemed to try not to show weakness either! It's like he subconsciously did act like the Black family, as much as he wouldn't like to admit it :p

Narcissa was also written really well. I can imagine her being protective over Regulus and worrying over him. She's always been a maternal person, huh? :p

Ugh, I love and hate Bellatrix. I hate her as a person but as a character she's brilliant! And she's exactly on canon! It's like J. K. Rowling wrote her, honestly! You're a very talented writer!

I also loved Dolohov. You've written him exactly how I imagined him. It's brilliant!

And Lucius is a slimy git, isn't he? :p I loved how Regulus didn't like him, haha! It shows that he's still a sixteen year old under all that bravado! :p

I loved the descriptions you've used as well, it really sets the scene but not so much that I'm distracted by it. I find a lot of authors (including myself) struggle with that so kudos!

Anyway, I really liked this! It was a great introductory chapter and I'm eager to read more! Great job!

10/10!

- Kayla :D

Hufflepuff, 2014

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