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Review:ohmymerlin says:
This is odd because I don't have my alias anymore, you know who I am! I actually forgot to favourite this and then I saw it in the recently updated novels or whatever and I did a little jiggle because I was so happy that there was another chapter, ahaha :p

Anyway, this chapter was good! They have the book and the Cloak! Yay! And I'm a bit glad Al is starting to stick up for himself to James, and I liked he felt guilty using blackmail - it shows that he's truly a good kid :)

I also liked that Al felt uncomfortable with David and Art using the Map because they lost it, it shows that he really is an ordinary eleven year old boy :p They get very particular with things and I love that you wrote it so well!

And they're so cute making plans and saying that they could be detectives! It just makes me aw! :p

This was another lovely chapter, you're such a talented writer! I LOVE this story, I can't believe I'd never read it before Christmas!

10/10 :)

- Kayla :D

Author's Response: Yay! You came back! :)

I think when Albus is at Hogwarts he seems more confident, than when he was at home. And Albus is a good kid. :)

Yeah, little first-year detectives. I like writing about kids.

It's not surprising you didn't see it before Christmas, I don't advertise it a lot except for on my signature and my profile.

Thank you so much for the review!!!



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