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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Hi! Here for the BvB review battle!

So I was sifting through your stories, and this one jumped out at me because I don't think I've ever seen a Neville/Hannah story, and this one was from her perspective. I was really excited to read it and I'm so glad you did.

I'm actually really upset it's only a one-shot, because I reached the end and found myself wanting to read more. How did their relationship continue on from there? I really love how you portrayed Hannah, and how your really emphasized how she felt about not being one of the more noticed ones. Ever. I also think that your characterization of Neville was spot on.

I loved the part where Neville tripped getting up to the bar. And then when she got all angry that he didn't recognize her? It was just all so perfect and you did such a good job and I just loved this story!

It was fantastic. You'd never be able to tell that you took a break from writing fan fiction.

xoxo LL

Author's Response: Hello!

I'm glad that this story jumped out at you because of the Hannah/Neville ship! I'm sure that there are some of those around the archives, but they definitely don't appear as often as Neville/Luna. I'm really happy that I wrote this story, too. It caused me to really fall in love with the ship. :)

I'm sorry that you're upset!! I know that I probably should have planned out a short story instead of a one-shot in the first place, because it DOES seem incomplete as a one-shot. Never fear! One day I will revisit this and see what I can come up with. Funnily enough, a lot of people have said things like, "I can't wait to read what happens next!" or something like that, so I guess I should take that as a sign for me to continue this story. ;)

I'm so glad that you liked Hannah and Neville! Spot on? You're really too kind! The part where Neville trips was one of my favorite parts to write, so it's great to know that you loved reading it. I wanted to show that he's still just a clumsy kid on the inside (and outside).

Thank you so, so much. This review is just too kind. :D

~UnluckyStar57


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