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Review:800 words of heaven says:
Your not-so-secret Secret Santa is back again to shower you with belated Christmas cheer!

So. Fluffy. How could I not love it? I'm a hardcore Teddy/Victoire shipper but this was so delightful! And wowee! Teddy is one romantic dude, taking her to MALAYSIA FOR A PICNIC UM WHERE CAN I GET A TEDDY PLEASE?

I love how their friendship was so solid, but there was that tension right from the beginning of the story. I was feeling all giddy and excited along with Dominique! It made that kiss (more of a snog session, really) at the end all the better for the agonising wait. And way to go Teddy for working up the courage! I didn't think he'd do it, but then again, he does take her to MALAYSIA FOR A PICNIC (still not over that).

I also really adored your description here. Part of the reason why I'm not over MALAYSIA FOR A PICNIC is the wonderful description. You created such a beautiful scene, not only by describing what it looks like, but also what it sounds like. I often forget that we have more than one sense when it comes to description, so I thank you for reminding me!

Obviously, I thought this was awesome! I'd love to read it once you've had the chance to edit it to your satisfaction. I'm a little curious to see what you'd change to make it even better!

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you once again! *hugs her Santa*

Haha again this is not really my usual kind of writing so it's awesome to hear such great comments. Teddy is amazing yes, and well, he makes me wish my boyfriend could be like him too so I don't blame you for not getting over the "taking Dom to Malaysia for a picnic" part xD

I am pleased that you enjoyed the friendship that the two shared as well as that you could read the tension and feel all the emotions Dom was experiencing. I am never too sure about snog sessions so I am glad you found it worth the wait haha. Teddy totally rocks xD

I am so happy you liked my description of the place. I have actually been to the island I described and I struggled really hard to translate its beauty into words so it's great to know that it worked. I enjoy making use of both sounds and sight when describing a setting so thank you =)

I have actually received so many positive reviews on this just the way it is, I may or may not change it. I will of course do a polishing but not sure if there'll be any major changes. Anyhow, I am really really happy that you liked this. Your review totally made my day (and I am not just saying it) so thank you =)

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