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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hello again!

I am still really enjoying this story! I am really loving Audrey's character. You've portrayed her so differently to all the other Audrey stories I've read. As a young adult she seems to be posh and/or uptight, and as an adult she is always really, really annoying. But your Audrey is so funny but seems so real at the same time! It's awesome.

Yay, we got to see Penelope in this chapter! As I (think) I said in my last review, I was hoping we would. And she is certainly a...nasty character. I wonder if she'll pop up more and cause problems for Audrey.

I enjoyed the conversation between Audrey and her friends. It felt very realistic, not to mention that article...oh dear, Audrey! I am now looking forward to her next encounter with Percy.

Oh my god, Granny Lucy is awesome! The most original character I have read for ages - I already love her. The bit where she mentioned Audrey's mother interested me, too, because we definitely got to see a bit of Audrey with her protective wall down. Does she want to know her mother? Will this play into the rest of the plot? I guess I'll have to wait to find out!

Woo, more Draco! He seems so different to the arrogant Slytherin/bully/Death Eater we knew, which makes me wonder why he has changed so much. Yes, because of the war, but I still reckon there must be something else!

Awesome chapter!


Author's Response: Hey Courtney!

I'm so glad that you are it means a lot to me :D I just wanted her to be fun and the opposite of Percy really sense her madness which was so much fun to do, because I think someone deserves to cut poor old Audrey some slack :P

I think you did, and she certainly is who Audrey usually appears to be so reversing it was a lot of fun :P I'm glad that you found her natural and Audrey and her friends too because they were so much fun to write!

Bahaha I think I just picked the craziest traits both of my grandma possess and then piled it into Granny Lucy and bam she appeared, so that might be why you've seen nothing like her before. I can say that it definitely does play into the plot and Draco influences her a lot, but no more as it would give it away :P

Definitely because of the war then I think the whole no longer being able to be the whole arrogant Slytherin/bully/Death Eater has helped him with that and made him into a more thoughtful person.

Thanks for such an awesome review! :D


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