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Review:Red_headed_juliet says:
Here for my second review! I truly love this story. I feel like the Grim Brother's would've loved it too. You did a wonderful job at storytelling, both with the description of the world you created and the colorful dialogue you used. Like I said before, Hamlin had structure. I could picture every part of it, and I felt as though I knew the characters. The chameos were wonderful, and I like how you incorporated the ghosts of Hamlin, the childless parents, protecting their descendents as they adventured in the last monument of the horror. The whole thing came full circle, and I really really enjoyed every chapter. I hope some day to improve my writing to this level. This is only the second founders story I've read, and I think the others will probably pale in comparison.

Thank you for writing this!

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Ah, you went through and read the whole story?! Yay! :) I was really happy to get a review on this last chapter and hear people's opinions on the whole story.

I love the idea of the Grim brothers loving it as well- thank you! :D I loved writing it and coming up with these characters, and imagining the rise and fall of Hamlin.

It's lovely to hear you liked the cameo characters and how they sort of link into the books. I really wanted it to feel complete and relate back to the books. This story was very challenging but also very rewarding for me, so hearing your comments really means so much.

Thank you so much for the incredible review! :) It was so thoughtful and really made my day. :D

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