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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Hi! I'm here with your requested review!

I won't lie, I've never ever read a Founders fic, and I thought that this was fantastic. I felt like it was something you would see in one of those captivatingly wonderful television shows that are set in the past. I really enjoyed the way you used dialogue and description to set the tone for the entire chapter, and carried it through.

The king was so chilling, yet I don't think he could've been any other way, and it was so fitting that I almost believed that this king was real. I was inherently curious about the man in the shadows when the woman was, and I really enjoyed the feeling of being completely immersed in the story. I felt a relation to the characters, especially the woman running away with the baby in her arms. I could imagine the fear that she felt with the idea that her baby might not be alive. The cold, and then the warmth she felt, and how in her state, it seemed like a blessing. Even though it was a curse. Brilliant job!

My favourite part of that entire chapter was definitely the ending when Lady Slytherin found the baby and picked him up and named him. I'm really intrigued to see how you play this out, and what happens next.

I found no spelling or grammar mistakes, and have no critiques to share. Just keep it up and I hope you re-request!

xoxo LL

Author's Response: Thank you for the amazing review! You know, you are the first one to comment on the 'man in the shadows', and I am so glad that you did because he is very important character, although shown briefly in just the Prologue.

Your first Founders story? I already feel the pressure :D I hope you like this though, I would hate to leave a bad impression on what is basically my favourite bit of the HP world.

I am incredibly happy that I got you interested, and will definitely re-request :)


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