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Review:maraudertimes says:
Hello!
Sorry this took so long! :S

So you say you want criticisms... There isn't another chapter? Regulus isn't in this? Albus isn't in this?

I honestly don't know. I really liked this chapter! Ellie is someone I can really relate with. While I don't necessarily drink a cup of coffee in the morning, I like a shot of espresso in my hot chocolate and I'm barely able to mumble if I don't.

And it's too bad that her dorm mates aren't necessarily her friends, but at least she has Scorpius and Rose (who are totally cute by the way!).

I think my favourite part of the chapter was:
"All my crushes had either been fictional or unattainable. I hadnít ever considered a situation where Iíd actually want the other person to know that I liked them in that way. There were too many unknown variables for my comfort. What if they didnít like me back? Or worse, what if they did like me back? Then what did I do? Kiss them? Get a puppy together? Ask them to marry me? What was the socially acceptable response in such a situation?"
I cannot tell you how many times in the past three months I have thought something along those lines.

And although there wasn't any Albus or Regulus, there was a lot of ScoRose, which I loved! They are so cute together without even being together that when they're finally together I might explode because of how cute they would be together.

Does that make any sense?

Anyways, this was a really great chapter and I'm really excited to read the next one. Honestly, I couldn't find anything wrong with this, so I'm sorry I couldn't criticise much... Is that something that needs an apology for?

Again, spectacular job!
Lo:)

Author's Response: I request like crazy for this story in your review thread, so it's completely understandable if you take your time getting to the request. Besides, real life is an actual thing which actually requires some attention every now and again!

Regulus was in the last chapter? And Albus is annoyingly difficult to write, so I kinda sorta... avoid writing him sometimes *hangs head in shame*

I'm glad that Ellie is still relateable, even though she's a little eccentric. I think she's actually a bit of a caffeine addict...

My inner ScoRose shipper could not be squelched into silence for another chapter, so I had Ellie be the ScoRose shipper.

I think that's the beauty of crushes - you don't really have to do anything with them if you don't want to. You can just pine away from afar for awhile, and then move on. Romantic relationships are a little more complicated than that, and Ellie understands this in her own special way.

I'm so happy that you also ship ScoRose! You can join Ellie (and me)! We'll make badges and everything!

Thanks so much for this fabulous review. I didn't answer it for a couple of days because I enjoyed staring at it and letting it stroke my ego :P


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