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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Hey, Isobel! I'm here to review your entry for my Supernatural Creature challenge. :)

So, that was so sinisterly creepy that I both loved it and was a little freaked out by it. Which, as you probably know because you know me, I freaking loved.

Tempting a desperate man, that's one of the scariest things about crossroads demons, I think - they will use anyone and can get to anyone, but the desperate are usually the best. The demon could get anything out of them. And James gives her everything. Uh oh.

The end was so sad, I expected James to go to hell, but the wife and the girls? You almost had tears from me. I was okay with her taking James and his soul and his magic, he deserved it for making the deal, but his family? That was just cruel.

I love that you added the genie in, since you changed from genie to demon, it was so cool to see it. :D

I loved this so much, Isobel! It was amazing! Thank you for entering my challenge.

Sam.

P.S. Go James, for having the same birthday as me! :D

Author's Response: Hey, Sam!

I'm glad that you thought this was creepy, because right now I'm just thinking: how can you have a crossroads demon in a story and not have it creepy? :P And yay that you loved it!

Where else would you find desperate men but Azkaban? And I don't think Anamaria expected him to give her /everything/, but she's not exactly going to say no, is she? :P

I know! I actually feel quite bad about the wife and girls, but he /did/ give her everything. She's a demon, a monster, and demons don't have sympathy for poor innocent humans :( Sorry for the cruelty *hugs*

Hehehe! Thank you! :)

And no problem; this was fun to write! Thank you for creating it!

PS: Clearly James is awesome ;)


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