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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Hey, it's Sam here, reviewing your entry for my Supernatural Creature challenge. :)

Wow. I did not expect that end. That the woman was Kendra and Albus was the son of an Incubus. It's put Albus in another light, thinking of him as a fighter for the light even with demon blood in him.

Speaking of demons, I love your Incubus. The thought of this supernatural creature as a feral-like shadow in the night was creepily fitting and different from other stories I've read.

I felt a little bad for the Incubus when Kendra saw him for what he was and sent him away; despite his less than human form, he seemed to really care for her and it was sad to see him cast aside so easily.

I love the use of second person. Now that I've read this, I can't imagine it being the same if it was written any other way. Like he's still talking to Kendra, always thinking of her - it's bittersweet.

I really loved this story. Thank you for entering my challenge!

Sam.

Author's Response: Hello! :)

Ah yes, I hoped that people would be surprised with the ending! :) I always felt like Dumbledore was a little too good to be true and having him be the son of an incubus provided a sort of convenient explanation for him to have such special powers. :P

Thank you! I loved writing the incubus and his particular personality. It was a lot of fun making him creepy, and I'm glad you found it different.

I do too! :( It really presented a shift for Kendra from having an insubstantial lover to finding a real life. It wasn't truly fair for him, as despite being a demon he did have true feelings of love and passion.

I'm glad you liked the use of "you." I loved writing in that style and felt it added to the creepy but also bittersweet factor.

Thanks for the beautiful review, for issuing the challenge which I really enjoyed, and for choosing this story as the winner! :) I was very honoured and had a wonderful time writing this story. :D


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