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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
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So, what is it about Lockhart's cloak that's so strange? Judging from Flitwick suddenly finding him alluring and rugged, I guess that it's some kind of charm to, well, charm people. But it's just a guess. And I don't know why the Bowtruckles attacked him (although I'm happy about it... :P).

This chapter was even funnier and better than I hoped it would be; Lockhart is such a coward, I hope Flitwick's thoughts about him become suspicions that all him to figure out what. Lockhart is really like.

The fairies are so sweet, I would willingly wade through the dark forest to watch them dance. After a bit of a push, naturally, but I'd go. :D

I really enjoyed this chapter.

Sam.

Author's Response:
Hi Sam!

Wow - thanks again! I am so glad that the humour comes across. I really enjoyed writing the bowtruckle scene. There is something really enjoyable about making a fool out of a character that is both smug and inept in equal measure.

Flitwick was rather fun to write in this chapter. The fairies on the other hand were actually quite difficult (especially as they are the main focus) - so I am very glad that liked their dance!

Many thanks again - your thoughts are very much appreciated and it was such a fab challenge to be part of!

~Elfy



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