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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Hey, it's Sam here, reviewing your entry for my Supernatural Creature challenge. :)

I'm very surprised over the lack of reviews. This made me laugh quite a bit, which I love. You write Lockhart really well, I hate him here too. He's just so conceited, I want to punch him in the face. Despite this, I'm very glad that you've chosen Flitwick and Lockhart for this story; it'll be very interesting to see how they get on with fairy catching. I'm excited to see that.

I loved the little bits of canon added to it, I felt like this could have been a missing moment from Chamber of Secrets.

And the inclusion of Snape was awesome! I really hope Snape puts something in his tea, it doesn't even have to be because of the dwarves. :P

This was a great chapter and I can't wait for more. *clicks next*

Thank you for entering my challenge.

Sam.

Author's Response: Thank you ever so much for you review! I really enjoyed writing for your challenge.

I am really glad that you found it funny and that you like my interpretation of Lockhart. Actually, I have a bit of an embarrassing story... When I was trying to write the dialogue for Lockhart, I decided to read what I had written out loud; doing (really bad) impressions of the characters to make sure it sounded right. It was only when I heard giggling that I realised that everyone was listening on the other side of the door! I still haven't quite lived it down! Everyone keeps asking me if I am suffering from 'overexposure' - SO embarrassing!

I really love Snape as a character ... I am still trying to think of something really despicable for him to do in one of the next chapters... there are just so many possibilities!

Thanks ever so much for your comments!

~Elfy


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