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Review:toomanycurls says:
oh heyy, there's that description. ...and then Cami walks in. Don't they have a door? or a lock?

They seem super-coupley together which I like. Not the ball and chain couple but the adorable couple who lets each other do their own thing.

and here's Wood to add to the competition. ^_^ What can I say, I like competiton.

Wood and Sirius seem like more than a handful together. I wonder how long until they realize they're competition? oh, now I guess.

I was going to comment on their cute argument about him being 17 but now all I have to say is WHAT IN THE EARTH DID YOU DO TO CAMI!??! or did she do it to herself? :( :( Lexi doesn't need anymore issues, okay??

I could just hug Sirius for trying to be so admirable and not take advantage of Lexi. It's not the right time for them to go to the next level for their physical relatinship. ^_^ Sirius is being quite decent.

Ooh, drama and harsh words from Sirius. He has a valid point that it's only Cami's fault that she tried to take her life.

WHAT DID I SAY ABOUT IT NOT BEING THE RIGHT TIME? any other chapter and I'd be jumping up and down with squee. *sigh*

I only have two more chapters to read!! eee

Author's Response: Yay for description! And nope! They're in the living room on the couch! And yay for them as a couple! They're so cute together! I just want to squeeze them!

Yay for Wood! I honestly like the kid. Just as a person (character?), he's super fun to write. I'm glad I'll be writing more of him later on (oops! spoilers!) And yup! Here's the realization that he's on his way to steal yo girl, Sirius!

Aw, but I liked that argument! It's so sweet! AND I'M SORRY! I JUST THOUGHT IT WORKED AND IT DID AND IT WAS IN MY PLOT! And yes, but Lexi will have tons more issues to deal with...

Yay for admirable Sirius! He *is* decent! But he is not known for his subtlety, nor his sugar-coating. He's straight to the point!

I'M SORRY! IT WAS IN THE PLOT! I PROMISE I'LL MAKE UP FOR IT! And I know, but it fits and will make sense, I promise!

Yay! (ish). Now I have to write more! :S

Thank you Rose!

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