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Review:toomanycurls says:
Yay! A party chapter!!

I feel bad that Remus is mostly annoyed by his friends. Just because they stick together so much and I'd hate for him to be constantly doing a *facedesk*.

I do enjoy Remus' commentary on the others (besides his annoyance). His thoughts about James needing his plans to go perfectly and the whole Lily Pad thing were interesting and entertaining.

so, I've been waiting to read Remus' version of this evening... WAIT, HE THINKS ITS A SOBERING TONIC TOO?!! WHAT IS IT? I mean, someone has to know what it is for real or does sobering tonic makes people black out and bump hips?

Peter's perspective is interesting. I can sense a slight layer of bitterness and a deep need for acceptance from his friends. The bit about James annoying him was a surprise but I liked it. Peter does seem in a bit over his head though when he and Sirius are confronted by the Slytherins.

This something big better involve snogging!

Author's Response: Yay!

Yes, but he loves them deep deep down! And he knows that they accept him for everything that he is! And yes, Remus's commentary was splendid to write!

YES I SWEAR ITS A SOBERING TONIC, BUT THEY JUST HAPPEN TO BE TEENAGERS! And no it doesn't, but sobering tonic does take *some* of the alcohol out of your blood. Not all of it and not instantaneously.

Yes, Peter is fun to write. I quite like him until he turns against his friends. But until then, I think of him as more of a good friend until he gets threatened. And yes, I find that Peter wouldn't like James so much as say Sirius.

And this something big just might!


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