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Review:toomanycurls says:
haha, of course Charlie sees there's more going on between Sirius and Lexi. ^_^

"Just because I said something doesn't make it true" is a very ominous thing to come from Sirius at this point. Especially after his comment at the end of the last chapter.

I like that they're reconciling their two versions of their run-in with Bellatrix. O.O SHE DIED?!?! Well, good thing for postmortem torture...

Ah, what is the purple light and how did it hurt her? I dunno, I feel quite attached to Annabelle now.

DUMBLEDORE TO THE RESCUE!! He's quite the BAMF.

Jeeze, Sirius, lay off the students!! He does need a leash. haha, I like that Lupin asks if she's jealous. It's a bit smug but it fits with his excellent observation skills.

Ugh, Why does Diggory still exist?!?! I really like that Lexi stands up for herself to him. Aw, it is sweet that Sirius said she's too good for him. ^_^ oh dear, a fight. I'm torn between thinking it's sweet to thinking they should shelf those egos. She likes bruises? Sirius does come up with good insults until he goes too far... I got a good laugh at Sirius' reaction to what Lexi says he should do to his family.

I giggled when he said pish posh.

and now they're having some hardcore flirting. uh, but WHY AREN'T THEY SNOGGING YET?!? I'm so torn. I don't want him to hurt her feelings but I need them to make out and have more romance.

Author's Response: Hi!

Oh course Charlie knows. She's a smart girl! And yes, I know! It all makes sense! Yup, I'm glad that Bellatrix went farther then she usually does, because where would this story be without that?

I know! Annabelle is such a sweetie! DUMBLEDORE! Yup, Sirius needs to slow down. And Lupin is like the doctor of love!

Diggory sucks. But he comes back at one point! And yay for cutie-pie Sirius! And yes, bruises are cool! Ugh... Sirius needs to tone down the insults! But he didn't know!

Heeeheee, Pish posh...

FLIRTING BUT NO SNOGGING I'M SO SORRY!!! THERE WILL BE LOTS IN LATER CHAPTERS THOUGH I SWEAR!!!

Lo:)


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