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Review:LilyLou says:
Hi, here for our review swap!

This is extremely interesting. It has suspense in a way that you have the reader wondering what exactly is going on before you explain it, which is really captivating and a great hook.

You explain everything really well. You tell us about Albus, James, and Gabby very well. Through your explanations about them, you describe Aaliyah, which I really admire.

I love the idea for this. How they sacrifice their own freedom for the others' sake. I really do admire that. Albus is really mysterious. I could hear his cool voice and see his hard eyes. He just seems so fascinating and one of those characters that the readers continuously become infatuated by.

Great story here! I love it, and will read on!


Author's Response: Hello!
Suspense is my guilty pleasure haha. And I believe in the showing, not telling method of writing. And is it a good hook? Never thought it was but thank you!!

I never thought about it that way--that through my explanations I describe Aaliyah herself. But that sounds so cool even though I doubt I pulled it off that cool-y (is that a word?).

I am super happy that you like the idea of this. And yeah they are the type that put the people they care about first. I guess that is how I shaped them all.

I meant for Albus to be mysterious but I have always had a nagging doubt in my mind that he wouldn't come out like that so your input really assures me. In a way, he's the character that puts you on edge. :)

Thanks for the sweet, lovely, oh-so-kind review!!


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