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Review:BookDinosaur says:
Hello! I'm here with your requested reviews from the forums. :)

I really loved how you dumped us straight into the action of the story, I enjoyed reading about how you gradually gave us more clues and let us know what was going on. The town burned was a really nice start to the story, sudden and mysterious and making me want to read on. Sometimes when an author tries to do that I end up being really confused and not knowing what's happening, but that didn't happen here, so major kudos to you!

I really enjoyed the touches of mystery you added in here as well, I understood what was happening but there were things I didn't understand either, and I think you did a fantastic job with that as well, letting us know enough but not too much. That really helped pull me into the story and want to read on.

Ah, the attackers were so brutal, it made me want to squash them! The way they just callously killed that old lady was so sad, I wonder what they wanted with Gryffindorís mother? Great job with the suspense and mystery here.

I really liked that hint at the end when Lady Slytherin opened the door and saw little Godric that he and Slytherin would grow up together, as foster brothers. Itís a really interesting idea and it would give them that really close friendship that keeps being mentioned in the series, so well done to you there!

Your imagery throughout this chapter was absolutely lovely, even though this was actually quite short you painted a really vivid picture here with your words and I could see everything that happened throughout this chapter in my mind. Your description was lovely, I liked this in particular: One hollow cry pierced through the subdued whisper of the fire. It really helped us to get the sombre mood of this chapter from the very beginning.

All in all this was a really good chapter which sucked me in and made me want to read more, I loved reading it!

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review!

I tried to make the Prologue as short as possible, with giving just enough information, but not giving too much away, and I am so happy that you liked it.

The idea that Godric and Salazar had been foster-brothers has been in my head for a while, actually, and basically I just went from there story-wise. That is actually the foundation of the whole plot :)

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