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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi, here for the final review!

I liked the beginning of the chapter with the theme of getting to know the past and what happened before Cora arrived at Hogwarts. The letter from the guy was really great and definitely gave me the chills. He had a very sinister way of writing which made me wonder what his aim is with Cora and her family. I know I keep on linking it back to the dance but itís the only thing I have right now.

I also liked how Cora discovered the photos as it meant we got to learn a lot more about Lily, Shelana and Snape and how they all interacted with one another. I really do hope that Lily finds a way of forgiving them because Iíve learnt so much about them now it makes me really want to see them in person.

Aw, Lily was so sweet with Cora and wanting to get to the others to help her. While the others were all sweet towards her and how they wanted to make sure she was ok and not too quiet and keep her from the snatches of Sirius. I think youíve built a really nice group of friends there and I really canít wait to see more of them and how their stories continue as itís all very exciting so far.

Yay for more Angus! I really like him as a character and I think that he and Cora have a lovely bond. I really canít wait to see her and Violet though and understand more about the tension between the two. Hmm, so Iím still trying to decide whether Cora was lying about whether she was alright or not but I liked all the suspense and ambiguity you included there.

Great chapter!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Thank you so much for doing these reviews, they've honestly made my week.

The guy is definitely very sinister and creepy. Of course, more hints about him will be revealed later on.

Friendship is one of the biggest themes of the story, along with family and secrets etc. I really wanted to show the friendship between Lily, Shelena and Snape because of this.

Lily is the loveliest person ever. The girls are definitely lovely too, but the reason behind them being so against Sirius will become more apparent a bit later. They do care for Cora though, so that's the main thing. They also definitely have their own stories to tell.

Angus is by far one of my favourite characters. He is incredibly important to Cora- as is the rest of her family, even Violet. The relationship between Cora and Vi will definitely develop as the story goes on.

Honestly, thank you so much for these reviews!

x Ely


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