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Review:patronus_charm says:
Back again for review number three!

One thing I really like about Coraís narration is how she keeps on thinking back to her life in France and how it differs to the one at Hogwarts. It was really interesting to read about different magical schools and how they have different approaches to learning. I really hope that later on in the story she returns to France because Iíve heard so much about it I really want to see it now.

I liked how they began to probe Cora about why she moved to England because Iíve been intrigued about that move too. I have a feeling the story she told them was only half of it so it will be interesting to see what the rest of it is.

I liked how bad James felt for the way Sirius treated Cora, but then Sirius came along flaunting his French and more than made up for it. It will be interesting to watch these two because I already sense some chemistry between the two and I have feeling that as both outsides and not really knowing where they belong they may have a link between them. Either way, itís nice to see an nicer version of Sirius.

Haha I loved how Lily was just like Ďoh honeyí it made me laugh a lot because poor old Cora thought he was really nice. I donít really know what to make of him because obviously Lilyís going to be a little prejudiced but then Coraís going to be naÔve too. Hmm, it will be interesting anyhow. The way you left it was really great! I assume the he is the person Cora danced with and perhaps the reason why they moved to England. This was a really great chapter!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hi!

I am hoping to include more about Cora's part life in France and hopefully a trip back home for her in later chapters. Ultimately, France is the most important setting of her story.

There will definitely be some interesting times where Cora and Sirius are involved. Again, there will be more Sirius too (and maybe some not so nice Sirius too)

I think Cora's this incredibly sweet girl, and yes- she's quite naive, but she's also not a stupid girl.

I'm glad you liked the chapter and thank you again for the lovely review!

x Ely


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