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Review:toomanycurls says:
This chapter - just wow. Knock me over with a feather. I read all the way through it and wasn't able to write a coherant review so I had to come back.

I love that you show more of Lexi's background and introduce her sister. I forgot that Lexi has a past and that it was complex. Cami seems like the flaky sister no one wants. I'm a bit surprised Lexi hadn't talked about her sister being in the psych ward before. It also has to be weird having a flat so close to the school but not going there while school is in session.

ahaha, and here's Black to aggravate her life. Um, I kind of liked the clothing scene here. And Lexi's preoccupation with his arms, well, I can sympathize. I can't believe the crowd they got to go to the hospital. Their dialogue is just incredible.

Their drinking game just doesn't seem like a smart idea. I mean, Lexi just had a massive brain injury and drinking isn't a good idea! Though I do love that they play I Never. I like the scandalous information they learn from each other. I cracked up at Lily having kissed James. :-o Charlie is so cold - her comment about Remus. grr.

Then the ending - with the death eatsr???! I just don't know what to do now. o.o

Author's Response: Hi Rose!

Yay for attempted coherency! Yup, that's our Lexi, complex with a bad past to boot. You've got to admit, neither Lexi nor Sirius really have a good background...

And Lexi doesn't like to talk about her sister because of what her sister did and how she's ashamed of her. And yes, it is a little awkward for her, but she does get to stay the night there on some Hogsmeade weekends! :)

Gosh darn you Black! And yes, well... It's Sirius Black. He has nice arms :P And yay for dialogue!

No, it is not a good idea, but have you ever told the marauders not to do something?

As for the game, Charlie wasn't trying to be rude, she was just joking! He really isn't a man yet, he's still a boy.

Erg! I know! Death Eaters in St. Mungo's? What?

Thank you Rose!
Lo:)


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