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Review:ginnypotter242 says:
Hello! I love love love this story. I'm surprised you don't have more reviews on this!

Lily's personality is wonderful. You write her so perfectly, I just love the way she acts. James was great in this chapter too- I like the protective big brother act he has going on.

I suppose those cookies didn't exactly work out the way they were supposed too- but the food fight scene was adorable. As was the dance afterwards. I can't wait to see how Lily does with her bakery! Baking isn't something I see Lily doing in a lot of stories. It's definitely a different job, but I think it fits her so well- especially your version of her.

Elliot and Lily together are amazing. Elliot seems so sweet! I loved this chapter, great job! Can't wait for the next one!

~Sara

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you love it!

Thank you so much for the lovely review! It really made my day! ♥

- Kayla :)


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