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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi there, here with your first of four reviews! I havenít read a Sirius/OC story in a while so I thought why not. :P

I really loved all the additions to give it a really French feel with the words, names used for one another, names they actually had and facts about the location. It really felt as if you cared about the background and hadnít just thrown it in for the sake of having someone French in it and that was such a great touch.

I really liked Coralie so far too because she had this lovely nice, warm nature about her which drew me in and I that was echoed by the fact that she didnít mind that her brother was tagging along with her while she went and made friends and that was a really great twist. I have a feeling that she might have some secrets too so it will be interesting to watch and wait.

The mix of friends sound really great too and I canít wait to see them interact with one another more. Iíve never seen the Marauders group of girls so big before so it will be interesting to see how you and try and balance them all in order to establish their characters. I can already see the links they have with the actual Marauders so it will be great to see them all join up in a way.

I thought that this was off to a really great start and I canít wait to read more and see what happens with Coralie!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hey!

Because this is a rewrite of the original, I had a lot of time to think about detail and how that would effect that characters. In the original, I didn't do that very well so I wanted to really get that down in this version.

As you may have guessed by 'Too Old', I adore writing happy families. I honestly don't think I could write Cora like this without including her family- they are such a big part of her and of the story too. It wouldn't be the same without them!

I know there are a lot of friends. I had thought about cutting some of them off but they really are all important characters and as the story develops, so do they. They each have their own stories that are as important as Cora's and I just love writing them!

Thank you so much! This review has honestly made my day!

x Ely


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