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Review:ReeBee says:
Hi there! I'm here with your requested review! :D okay, so u only put down two points on your 'Areas of Concern' so I wasn't sure whether to address only the two or all bases. So, I decided to do all bases; after all, better to be safe than sorry. :)

Characterisation: I don't think there was anything wrong with Tonk's characterisation! Though, I would have liked to see more playfulness and cheekiness, I could sill see that if was Tonks :)

Description: lovely! I lived it! It was so sweet and really vivid! Great job!It was such a fluffy sweet one shot! No CC there! :D

Plot/Flow: I personally found it very entertaining! I really lived reading this little slice of life! :D flow was a bit slow, but still entertaining! The description would have made it slow (especially in the first half), but it was lovely to read, so don't worry too much about that! :D

No major grammar/syntax to worry about!

Great one shot! Lived it! Feel free to rerequest! :)


Author's Response: Hey there, thanks for stopping by!

Well, I only put down what my specific concerns were. I sort of expect that reviewers will cover the bases anyway. I'm glad you decided to go that route :)

I felt like the theme of the piece didn't really leave room for too much cheekiness, aside from the anecdote about setting the drapes on fire. But I'm glad Tonks still resembled her canon self.

Sorry to hear the flow was a bit slow - I was worried about that. But I'm glad the description kind of made up for it.

Thanks for your kind review :)


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